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Beauteous Forest Vavroovahana Patra

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#1 Beauteous Forest Vavroovahana Patra on 2012-01-18, 11:45

Noctis
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Beauteous Forest Vavroovahana Patra






Beauteous is the forest;

In summer provides oxygen.
Tranquilises creatures minds, provides peace, merriment.
The forest is beautiful, mother’s shrine smiles in the forest, devotees
are delightful.

Beneath the trees shade passers-by rest a while, chilly breeze kisses
The passers-by gaudily;
Passers-by enchant peacefully.
Poets rest a while, depict beauteous poems enthusiastically;
Inhale pure oxygen gladly.

The green forest is a Gift of Almighty;
In all poets mind provides peace, gaiety.
Poet depicts the Eternal Truth of life;
Provides peace in human minds, evaporates grief.

I pray my mother Sarala Daily;
Mind derives perennial peace cheerfully.
Chanting hymns I derive peace;
Singing mother’s devotional songs derive bliss.

Across
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Nice poem noctis, flows really well together.

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Cute, and elegant. :3

R O I
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i liked the ending, a very well pleased poem to read. Smoothing.

Balthier
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gorgeous poem, i like it as well. it's calm and smoothing.

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Noctis
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thanks for the lovely comments.

Riku_Keyblade
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it was sorta short to me, wish it was longer but i liked it, idk why I'm just reading it.

cyberman
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nice poem, what was/is it's motive.

Peprika!
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Beautiful and soothing. ~

Noctis
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Zex56_0 wrote:nice poem, what was/is it's motive.

It's motive was to inspire others to write calm soothing poems.

@Peprika! wrote:Beautiful and soothing. ~
Thank you. :clap:

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@Riku_Keyblade wrote:it was sorta short to me, wish it was longer but i liked it, idk why I'm just reading it.

A poem is technically a poem, short or not doesn't matter the length as long as you like it, then it should be fair.

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