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#1 Creation is A Hurt on 2009-09-07, 20:04

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"Some people say Pain can't hurt you
Other's say Pain be a vuo do
My Days may come to an end
While you may be up in a bend
Listening to my Sorrows
I will continue to sorrow and borrow
For what has come up
into the meaning of life"


Ok please tell me what you thought about it.

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#2 Re: Creation is A Hurt on 2009-09-07, 20:19

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I like it, if there was a rating it would be 7/10 :D

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#3 Re: Creation is A Hurt on 2009-09-07, 20:23

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great work, also you had a bit of errors, what is vud do? DXX

#4 Re: Creation is A Hurt on 2009-10-03, 19:17

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@Balthier wrote:
"Some people say Pain can't hurt you
Other's say Pain be a vuo do
My Days may come to an end
While you may be up in a bend
Listening to my Sorrows
I will continue to sorrow and borrow
For what has come up
into the meaning of life"


Ok please tell me what you thought about it.

cute poem. XD i like the second sentence, which was very nice.

#5 Re: Creation is A Hurt on 2009-11-20, 12:30

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I think its interesting, just make it longer nd cleaerer

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#6 Re: Creation is A Hurt on 2009-11-21, 11:28

L'arc en ciel
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it's cute ^^ short n sweet



#7 Re: Creation is A Hurt on 2009-11-21, 21:48

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@Balthier wrote:
"Some people say Pain can't hurt you
Other's say Pain be a vuo do
My Days may come to an end
While you may be up in a bend
Listening to my Sorrows
I will continue to sorrow and borrow
For what has come up
into the meaning of life"


Ok please tell me what you thought about it.

I like it. What does "vuo do" mean?

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#8 Re: Creation is A Hurt on 2009-11-22, 09:39

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@Roxas wrote:
@Balthier wrote:
"Some people say Pain can't hurt you
Other's say Pain be a vuo do
My Days may come to an end
While you may be up in a bend
Listening to my Sorrows
I will continue to sorrow and borrow
For what has come up
into the meaning of life"


Ok please tell me what you thought about it.

I like it. What does "vuo do" mean?
Have you ever heard of the doll story with the magic thing. It's called "vuo do" with the puppet and the needles. (etc.



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All hope is lost without a litte fear
Destine to crave what one doesn't see
For he must allow himself to be consumed
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#9 Re: Creation is A Hurt on 2009-11-26, 08:52

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I saw a few errors, your not a noob at writing T_T,
but you can atleast make the story a bit more interesting as well.
5/10

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