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Forgotten- A KH story

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#1 Forgotten- A KH story on 2009-02-28, 17:12

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They were using her to wipe the memories of whoever entered, but they wanted so much more, turning on each other.
She didn't want to be there in the first place, she didn't want to erase memories.
Because.. He's out there, her prince,her saviour... But they didn't want Sora near her- They wanted Sora to forget her, with Namine as their weapon- who knows what they could get up to..

#2 Re: Forgotten- A KH story on 2009-03-01, 08:44

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:yea: This nice, it's rather a settling story.


You should have bolded the Prologue, lol. But other than, it's neat.

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#3 Re: Forgotten- A KH story on 2009-03-01, 19:25

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Dream Kiss wrote:Prolouge

He's out there, her prince,her saviour... But they didn't want Sora near her- They wanted Sora to forget her, with Namine as their weapon- who knows what they could get up to..


This is good, but try not to use. These -. They somewhat are confusing, and you need to use them at a certain in your story. Other, it's good.

#4 Re: Forgotten- A KH story on 2009-03-02, 12:19

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Okay, thanks for the support.

#5 Re: Forgotten- A KH story on 2009-03-06, 09:29

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I agree, this could be a little more better.

#6 Re: Forgotten- A KH story on 2009-03-09, 19:03

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You need to continue this, and if you'd like any advice im more than willing to help (:.

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