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#1 Empty Echoes on 2009-02-20, 16:11

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Empty Echoes
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As I fall
I can see it all
See the reflections
On my inner wall
And as all my hopes fail
No friend to pay the bail
I can tell I’m alone here
My talking is responded
With empty echoes

Empty echoes
The reflections of reflections
Nothing inside
Nothing on the outside
All I hear
Is empty echoes


I see stars
I’m surrounded by fire
I’m losing my restraint
Revenge is my desire
My inner battle starts
The bullets are flying

I lie dying
I cry to the heavens for help
But all that’s coming back
Is empty echoes

Empty echoes
The voiceless mourn
But I can’t hear their vigil
Empty echoes
The demons scorn
It’s what I hear
The empty echoes

And all I hear is wrong
The speeches and the songs
And as the birds close in
They see me dying

And while I cannot see
What it means to me
It’s like I’m drowning in the sea
Not breathing, I’m crying

I feel it. Feel the ground
Feel the tension in the air
It means nothing to me
I could kill for an answer

I’m telling myself
It will be okay
But it’s inside of me
The empty echoes

Empty Echoes
My mind’s response to me
Don’t know what to believe
Empty echoes
I fall to my knees
My life is now the fee
For the empty echoes

As I die I sink into the sky
As I die I sink into the sky
And I realize man can’t truly fly
And I don’t think I will ever see
Why cold, hard truth can never be
Why the ground is separate from the sea
Why the lock is separate from the key
And why you aren’t here with me

And the empty echoes
They can’t take my soul
Oh empty echoes
Leave me; come back when you’re full
Empty echoes
The darkness now is clearly nigh
As I hit the ground
And sink into the sky…

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Last edited by Saraxos on 2009-04-24, 17:46; edited 2 times in total

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#2 Re: Empty Echoes on 2009-02-20, 16:35

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These are some deep words you got here, is any of this going on in your life time.?

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#3 Re: Empty Echoes on 2009-02-20, 16:54

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that's beautiful

#4 Re: Empty Echoes on 2009-02-20, 17:51

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Lalwz your pretty good at writing. :Wisle:

@ninja-vengeance wrote:that's beautiful
Yeah it is. <333

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#5 Re: Empty Echoes on 2009-02-20, 18:26

Trigger
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Your very creative infact, nice.

#6 Re: Empty Echoes on 2009-02-21, 11:51

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Reisen wrote:These are some deep words you got here, is any of this going on in your life time.?
no, it's about a person who got in a plane crash in a desolate place.

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#7 Re: Empty Echoes on 2009-02-21, 11:54

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@Saraxos wrote:
Reisen wrote:These are some deep words you got here, is any of this going on in your life time.?
no, it's about a person who got in a plane crash in a desolate place.

Yeah, I knew that,but I just asking if you had a close call to that.

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#8 Re: Empty Echoes on 2009-02-22, 02:29

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That was very beautiful.
You're good, keep at it. :3

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#9 Re: Empty Echoes on 2009-02-22, 14:12

Guest

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Lovely, keep it up. Nice writing.

#10 Re: Empty Echoes on 2009-02-22, 18:06

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Reisen wrote:
@Saraxos wrote:
Reisen wrote:These are some deep words you got here, is any of this going on in your life time.?
no, it's about a person who got in a plane crash in a desolate place.

Yeah, I knew that,but I just asking if you had a close call to that.
no, thank God.

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#11 Re: Empty Echoes on 2009-04-24, 17:47

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I updated it because I thought the plane crash was a bit shallow. now it's about a person isolated from society

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#12 Re: Empty Echoes on 2009-04-25, 01:17

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wow this piece of writing is amazing, too. definitely keep it up :yea:



#13 Re: Empty Echoes on 2009-04-25, 11:38

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I think it's okay, try to use more balled as well. :3:

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