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#1 In Monochrome on 2009-02-06, 06:50

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there was once a dreary town,
"Melancholy"
in monochrome and monotones
I once lived there

no bird would sing
nor flower bloom
a pallet of shades of gray
was the town Melancholy

there was once an empty town,
"Melancholy"
with empty skies and empty rain
empty hearts, empty tearstains
empty roads, empty shadows

hidden kingdom of promise
fleeting thoughts, useless dreams
so said the empty
City Melancholy

there was once a heartless town,
"Melancholy"
between light and dark
swallower of hearts

on the brink of chaos
the final road to midnight
a castle of oblivion
sat upon the hill

there was once a dreary town,
"Melancholy"
in monochrome and monotones,
we lived there, you and me
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#2 Re: In Monochrome on 2009-02-15, 08:29

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Nice, I think you made some era's along the way. Also you didn't end your poem with a period.

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#3 Re: In Monochrome on 2009-02-15, 09:29

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Okay thanks for your response.

#4 Re: In Monochrome on 2009-02-17, 06:47

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I think it's wondering, and yea a few command era's, but nice.

#5 Re: In Monochrome on 2009-02-22, 07:13

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That was sweet. I liked it very much. <3 :3

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